pow!

what do you do when you are like 4k into your wip and you kind of hate it.

i have been told that my style is more like show than tell, and that maybe i should do a little more telling. like i get that because i lean on emotions too hard and i am a lazy writer and there is no way around that. but goddamn, i don't know how much more i can do.

i don't like it at all???